There is a proficient understanding here on how your main product uses and develops forms and conventions. Good discussion on the use of micro-elements, MES and character representation of your work which is supported well by existing media products and relevant theory which is drawn upon. Goodwin's conventions are highlighted throughout in terms of what makes your product conventional to existing media products. Proficient skill in the choice of form in which to present the evaluation question as it is detailed where required as well as illustrative too. At most times, proficient ability to communicate.
-I would say you developed Mulvey's theory as I don't think the females in your video are as sexual as Mulvey suggests -slide 9 needs some rephrasing. Not quite sure what you are suggesting -give it a proof read
There is a proficient understanding here on how your main product uses and develops forms and conventions. Good discussion on the use of micro-elements, MES and character representation of your work which is supported well by existing media products and relevant theory which is drawn upon. Goodwin's conventions are highlighted throughout in terms of what makes your product conventional to existing media products. Proficient skill in the choice of form in which to present the evaluation question as it is detailed where required as well as illustrative too. At most times, proficient ability to communicate.
ReplyDelete-I would say you developed Mulvey's theory as I don't think the females in your video are as sexual as Mulvey suggests
-slide 9 needs some rephrasing. Not quite sure what you are suggesting
-give it a proof read